Tuesday, May 12, 2009

Slow day baiku

A crosswind wobble
at forty miles per hour
keeps a mere mortal humble

(And makes me wish
I could descend like these guys.)


Debbie said...

I don't mean to rain on your muse but aren't haikus 5, 7, 5 syllables?

Tim said...

Well DUH, yeah! Unless I've had a couple of beers and miscount, making it 5, 7, 7. Thanks for raining on my parade, Deb!